Present: Marianne Burke, Justine Dee, Nancy Gell, Juvena Hitt, Ben
Littenberg, Jen Oshito, Adam Sprouse-Blum, Connie van Eeghen
Start Up: Other interesting work on rehab, muscular and skeletal tissues,
cancer, and x-ray reports as predictive of falls
1.
Discussion: Nancy Gell’s first draft
manuscript on participant perspectives from an intervention to support physical
activity maintenance in cancer survivors.
She is looking for overall feedback on presentation of Methods and
Results (what is confusing, missing), title edits/suggestions, formatting for
Results to present the information cohesively.
a. Add author,
date, page numbers, and line numbers to support discussion
b. Clarify
language that has specific meaning, e.g. accountability means “being held
accountable by an outside party”. Also
be parsimonious and direct, esp. second and last paragraphs of Intro.
c. Add more to
intro about technology, beyond reference to mobile health apps
d. Start with what
is exciting about this paper: rationale – how this app overcomes this barrier
in this population. Center title on
this, with “novel”
e. Identify the
research question and the design
f.
Methods: re-order the paragraphs to follow formal report
g. Intervention:
break out table to shorten sentence
h. Exit interview
section is the data collection effort
i.
Results re: Convenience of Technology – two ideas combined into one;
data only support one (texting technology).
Does “self-monitoring” effect apply to FitBits?
j.
Conclusions will be related to the value placed on both
independence in health maintenance and need for connection and contact with
others to accomplish that maintenance.
i.
“We know that at the end of the expensive, intensive programs,
people left to their own have high failure rates” – Intro. This technology is engaging and automatic.
ii.
Concern in literature about privacy; patient’s willingness to
share data and “being watched” indicated that this was not a barrier, but a
facilitator. This directly affects the
theme of accountability.
k. Discussion:
include “privacy.”
2.
Next Workshop Meeting(s): Fridays, 1:00 p.m.
– 2:00 p.m., at Given
Courtyard South Level 4 until end of Aug.
a.
July 15: (no
Gail) Justine – preliminary stages of research, with educational training
module and focus group
b.
July 22: (no
Ben, no Gail)
c.
July 29: (no
Ben)
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