1. Warm Up: Proposals and pubs all progressing, plus faculty interviews at RMS; the challenges of staying on the cycle of editing/submission rather than cleaning the house!
2. Levi: Review manuscript titled “The impact of COVID-19 burden on functional health among adult primary care patients with multiple chronic conditions: a longitudinal study” Not ready for cone of silence. We are looking for overall feedback. Any ideas on where to submit this? Can you pick a section to focus on so we don’t get a bunch of feedback on intro/methods. Discussion probably needs the most work.
a. Is it functional health (title) or what is used in the manuscript? Why not just health? Health status? Health outcomes?
b. Journal: Consider JGIM
c. Introduction: isn’t obvious that those that perceive Covid burden as heavier would have worse health status? How would this relate to the phenomenon of catastrophizing a difficult experience?
i. There were multiple options for measuring burden; the personal questions were of most interest
ii. How to intervene on burden – address in Discussion section
iii. Relevance is in the need to screen, address, treat, and follow up w MCC patients experiencing a pandemic
1. Also, the need for patient initiated reach out for resources and care
iv. This is a descriptive piece: historical relevance when we don’t know the long term consequences of Covid. In the future, we will need this baseline to understand the long term effects – supports future epidemiological understanding
d. Methods
i. “Follow up survey” refers to “Wave 4” – but this is a nonessential detail for the manuscript
ii. Liked Table 1; recreate as a figure?
e. Results
i. Table 2: why multiple columns – is there an important difference among these Personal burden responses? Bring these out
1. Consider adding an “overall column” or “total N column”
2. Or a Table 1 with a single column, and Table 2 for “Other Covid Indicators”
3. “Don’t waste a Table 1 with a single column” is a good guide, but add the Total Column
f. Discussion
i. What a discussion section is for: critically analyze results, context of literature, strengths and limitations, take home message, other interesting findings, next step (maybe)
1. Context: what we know and what we don’t know – relevance
2. Reinforce the answer to the research question
ii. Message: focus on the take home message – the value of this study epidemiologically in this historic bubble early into the pandemic
1. There is validity to asking someone in the midst of a pandemic simple questions to assess their overall health
g. Send your other comments in to Levi!
3. Next week: TBD
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